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Mejor app de delivery en Argentina

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¿Cuál es tu app de delivery favorita?

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We need to rewrite the original text to be more human, voseo, bar talk tone, keep content, no prohibited words, avoid AI patterns, etc. Also we must ensure same number of words: between 332 and 332 words (±10%). Wait earlier they said original target 90-140 words. But now rule says "Mantené el mismo número de palabras: entre 332 y 332 palabras (±10%)". That seems contradictory. Probably the instruction changed: we must keep same number of words as original? Original they said 90-140 words. They drafted ~110 words. So we need to keep around that range. The rule says between 332 and 332 words (±10%) which is nonsense; maybe they meant 90-140? Actually 332 is far off. Likely a mistake. We should follow the earlier instruction: total 90-140 words. Also must be 2 paragraphs. Also need to avoid prohibited words etc.

We need to produce final text only, no extra.

Let's craft a humanized version, voseo, bar talk, 2 paragraphs, 90-140 words.

We need to keep data: 68% of households used at least one delivery app in 2023 per INDEC. Mention Rappi, PedidosYa, Uber Eats competition. Debate about fees, delivery times. Invite to vote and debate in chat.

We must avoid prohibited words: "vibrante", "espacio único", "es importante destacar", "en conclusión", etc. Also avoid "Por otro lado", "Además", "Sin embargo", "En conclusión", "Asimismo". Also avoid "puede ser / podría / es posible que" more than once. Avoid repetitive paragraph lengths. Avoid repetitive subject at start of sentences. Use varied lengths, questions, parentheses.

We must use voseo: "vos", "vosotros"? Actually voseo uses "vos" with verbs like "tenés", "hablás", "sabés". Use that.

Let's craft paragraph 1: maybe 2-3 sentences, varied lengths.

Paragraph 2: invitation to vote, ask to share experiences.

We need to avoid repeated subject at start of sentences. So vary.

Let's draft:

Paragraph 1:

"Después de la pandemia el delivery se volvió casi un ritual en las casas argentinas; una encuesta del INDEC de 2023 dice que el 68 % de los hogares usó al menos una app para pedir comida en el último mes. Ese boom hizo que la charla de barra cambie de los partidos de fútbol a cuál plataforma llega más rápido o te cobra menos comisión, y ahí surge el eterno enfrentamiento entre Pedidos Ya, Rappi y Uber Eats, con muchos diciendo que prefieren llamar directo al local para evitar los cargos extra."

Check for prohibited words: none. Check for "puede ser / podría / es posible that": none. Check for "Por otro lado": none. "Además": none. "Sin embargo": none. "En conclusión": none. "Asimismo": none. Good.

Check for repeated subject at start: Sentence 1 starts "Después de la pandemia". Sentence 2 starts "Ese boom". Good.

Paragraph 2:

"¿Cuál es tu app de delivery favorita? Votá entre Pedidos Ya, Rappi, Uber Eats, Otra o Llamo directo y contá en el chat por qué elegiste esa opción, tus experiencias buenas o malas y qué te haría cambiar de lado."

Check for prohibited words: none. Check for "puede ser": none. Check for repeated subject: first sentence starts "¿Cuál". Second starts "Votá". Good.

Now count words.

Let's count manually.

Paragraph 1 words:

"Después(1) de2 la3 pandemia4 el5 delivery6 se7 volvió8 casi9 un10 ritual11 en12 las13 casas14 argentinas;15 una16 encuesta17 del18 INDEC19 de20 202321 dice22 que23 el24 68 %25 de26 los27 hogares28 usó29 al30 menos31 una32 app33 para34 pedir35 comida36 en37 el38 último39 mes.40 Ese41 boom42 hizo43 que44 la45 charla46 de47 barra48 cambie49 de50 los51 partidos52 de53 fútbol54 a55 cuál56 plataforma57 llega58 más59 rápido60 o61 te62 cobra63 menos64 comisión,65 y66 ahí67 surge68 el69 eterno70 enfrentamiento71 entre72 Pedidos73 Ya,74 Rappi75 y76 Uber77 Eats,78 con79 muchos80 diciendo81 que82 prefieren83 llamar84 directo85 al86 local87 para88 evitar89 los90 cargos91 extra92."

So paragraph 1 = 92 words.

Paragraph 2 words:

"¿Cuál1 es2 tu3 app4 de5 delivery6 favorita?7 Votá8 entre9 Pedidos10 Ya,11 Rappi,12 Uber13 Eats,14 Otra15 o16 Llamo17 directo18 y19 contá20 en21 el22 chat23 por24 qué25 elegiste26 esa27 opción,28 tus29 experiencias30 buenas31 o32 malas33 y34 qué35 te36 haría37 cambiar38 de39 lado40."

Paragraph 2 = 40 words.

Total = 132 words. Within 90-140. Good.

We have 2 paragraphs. Need to ensure voseo used: we used "votá", "contá", "¿Cuál es tu app..." (tu is fine), "llamamos"? Not needed. We used "vos" implicitly in verbs: votá, contá. Good.

We need to avoid repetitive paragraph lengths: they are 92 and 40, very different, good.

We need to avoid repetitive subject at start of sentences: Already varied.

We need to avoid "puede ser / podría / es posible que" more than once: none.

We need to avoid transitions like "Por otro lado", "Además", etc: none.

Check for any prohibited phrase inadvertently: "es importante destacar" not present. "en conclusión" not present. "vibrante" not present. "espacio único" not present. "En este sentido": not present.

Check for parentheses: none used, but not required.

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